Saturday 6 December 2014

Mighty Two


In this riddle you need to guess what are the mighty two, talked about in this poem. Clues of riddle are given inform of poem stanza's and answer is present at the end of poem.

It is the one which holds you tight
It is one which shows path right
 Both together, can do miracle
A simple thing can turn a wonder

Together as a companion smart
Greets you for a lovely start
When joined at a sacred place
Our strength sums up with grace

Its embrace is so dearest though
Love and peace jubliantly glow
Making everything composed
Melting every malignant soul

When raised in a delicate stroke
Marvellous masterpieces flow
When it tries to level with eyes
Influx of feelings and proud suffice

Few times it does task and busy
And sometimes lays neglected being lazy
It needs a touch to be active at moment
Let special one end it’s yearning at present

If you understand its significance
You never raise it without giving it substance
Best is to keep them compact and sound

As it have crucial jobs all around

Guessing what it is which so varied
It’s part of you all described
Yes, your "hands" are so special
That are mighty two and surely vital
















41 comments:

  1. Oh, I really enjoyed this! What a clever approach. Your poem made me think of everything that hands do. Hands are very integral to so many things we do and experience in life. Always good to see you at Poetry Jam!

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    1. Thanks a lot Mary for your kind words. Even I enjoy very much reading Poetry Jam entries, learning more :)

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    1. Welcome to the blog Laurie, keep visiting :)

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  3. I really enjoyed this poem. I'm not so good with riddles, but it was very well done. Thank you for sharing it for SoCS. :)

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    1. Riddle word itself keeps our senses active, so a different approach to prompt, Thanks for appreciation.

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  4. The riddle was fun and I did guess by the end! Thanks for visiting my blog as well.

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    1. Peggy, the answer was obvious for Poetry Jam entries, but tried to hide it till end :) . Loved your blog, sure I will drop by soon.

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    1. You mentioning clever, means my riddle was success :))

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  6. Lovely use of the SoCS prompt! :)

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  7. This was a very clever take on the prompt!

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  8. A creative approach hands are capable of many tasks..

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  9. A riddle in a poem is a good spin.

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    1. Just thought of something different....thank you for stopping by.

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  10. Refreshing and fun. A whiff of freshness from the usual verses that we have. Wonderful write MS!

    Hank

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  11. This was lovely Sonal, and I was delighted to have you join us at Two Shoes Tuesday! It is amazing, when we stop to consider very ordinary things like hands, how many things their actions impact, they can be lifted up for good or risen in anger and strife. Better that we join hands together and walk this journey called life! I hope we'll see you again with us next week! :-)

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    1. I am equally delighted to be a part of Two Shoes Tuesday.Thank you for appreciating.

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  12. Liked the poem. Very clever to make it a riddle.

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  13. Nice riddle, nice reading poem. I wasn't thinking with all think engines but though just maybe it was your Bible and your Prayers. That came from me sighting your top "Most Loved Ones" entry. It fit, sort of.

    Thank you for peeking in on my little ride through a part of our Old Town and for leaving your nice comment. There are some old and new pretty houses and a nice park also that didn't fit my 'story'. Really though, just one traffic light at the intersection of two State Highways.
    ..

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    1. Just jotted down my feelings for the almighty.....Keep Visiting.

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  14. It was fun how you "manipulated" the words to fashion this poem.

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  15. Hands are special indeed and powerful when clasped in prayer ~ Thanks for sharing it with us ~

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    1. Every body part has its own strengths......Keep Visiting

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  16. Interesting way to attack the prompt, creating a lovely riddle poem!

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  17. smiles....cool approach...our hands carry so much potential, often it comes down to how we choose to use them.....

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    1. Exactly Brian it all depends on the way we put them to use.

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  18. Give a round of applause (clap hands) for the poem!

    ROG, ABCW

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    1. Thank you Roger, liked the way you appreciated :)

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