Sunday 9 November 2014

Wit Enlightens - Shadorma

Deep Hidden 
No way to be seen 
Open mind 
Bit of wit 
Dream alleyway surely creep 
Just grab it on time 



My first attempt in Shadorma, which is a poetic form that consists of 6 lines stanza. Click Shadorma link to know more about it.


@Meenal

10 comments:

  1. "Open mind" is the key, I think.

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    1. Yes George, open mind can solve many unsaid questions too.

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  2. Welcome to the world of shadorma!
    I like this phrase -- the dream alleyway - very nice!

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    1. Happy you liked it. Shall come up with more Shadorma poetry soon :)

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  3. Lovely shadorma ... really enjoyed your piece very much ... and thanks for your participation!

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  4. The poem conveys so much in six lines! Lovely!!

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    1. Saying in few words was little tough, but finally made it. Keep visiting Usha Menon

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Your each word matters! So drop a word or two :)