Tuesday 25 April 2017

Unsaid Understanding - #ShortStory

Hey Anu, I think we can have Chinese for dinner, Mohit scrolled to the menu in his one of the food app.

Anu came from kitchen and served him South Indian delicacy, as though Mohit's words were unheard to her. The other day Mohit left for office early, in the evening Mohit called up and said he has an urgent meeting and will be late. Mohit returned from office the next day morning feeling sleepy and tired. He was a surprised to see the locked door. 


Quickly he could find another pair in his laptop bag and barged into the house. He called Anu on her number but it was of no
use as she left it on the dining table. Mohit called her friends but she was nowhere. Then he called Neeta who lived beside their house but he got a no in reply. It was almost 3 hours and no signs of Anu anywhere. Mohit just couldn't know what to do where to go. He remembered Anu was a bit quiet these days and due to his hectic schedule they did not get much time to talk and tried to recall what Anu said to her last; but failed to remember. Mohit's negative thoughts started to hover his mind. "Anu cannot leave me" he screamed. 
“What happened Mohit...are you dreaming”,  Anu questioned him casually.

He hugged Anu tightly and told her about his dream and said "I love you my darling, it's just that new project is taking time to get in shape". 

To which Anu replied smilingly, "Silly why will I go, get in; looks like you dozed off after ringing the bell".

Unsaid Understanding Story - AuraOfThoughts



Haven't we felt the urge to say many things to our loved one's but fewer we hesitated and many times situation was not apt. But your loved ones understand your unsaid words. Be sure to express and ready to understand the unsaid stories of life.

Finally would say "Heart is a true messenger; it doesn't require any senses to communicate its feelings".

What do feel about unsaid words? Share your thoughts in comments below.

Writing for #AtoZChallenge April 2017,  Day 21 - Letter U, U for Unsaid, Understanding

@Meenal

15 comments:

  1. Such a nice story. Communication is the key in every relation. We shouldn't let unsaid words and feelings hang over our heads and regret them later. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. The regret can make us more uncomfortable in life, its better to say the words.

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  2. Sometimes unsaid words are the most important words. We don't feel the need to say them or sometimes we don't feel like giving it due attention.

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    1. I feel we don't give due attention , we just take things for granted with closed ones.

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  3. Words felt should never be left unsaid, after all kya pata, kal ho na ho.

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  4. This is a nice story written by you that tells that understanding is necessary in a relationship.

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  5. Beautiful story and loved the narration and end msg as well. I agree we have a kind of six sense for understanding unsaid feelings of our dear ones..and most of the time it get convey even without saying a word.

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  6. This is really touching and beautifully weaved story and tells a lot about the relations

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  7. I feel the same if one can understand the emotions without using words is the unsaid understanding. Nice story.

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  8. Yeah it should be understood but I think when you reach that comfort level, you dont need to say anything but once in a while it helps to say your feelings loudly.

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  9. Understandings the unsaid and misunderstanding the said is today's trend 😊 beautiful story!!

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  10. Our loved ones are the ones to keep us sane and grounded. Never fair to ignore them for work or the fear of them leaving will turn to reality.

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  11. I am a big fan of short stories and this sounds like a good read.

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  12. Very beautifully written crisp and gives strong message. Agee we should not hold to express our feelings.

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  13. such a beautiful story, it has so much depth. Understanding the unsaid is what we all need.

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