Saturday 22 April 2017

Sparkling Solitude

Walking unaided
I assemble my thoughts

Over silent sea
Drizzle plays euphoric sound
I need your deepness
To prioritize dreams

To learn how to balance
Relations with perfect colour

I need your wisdom
For appropriate pathway

Solitude my hero 
love you everlastingly

Your presence builds view
Clearly answering questions

You are my truthful mentor

The above is the Choka poetry which is formed by writing alternately 5 /7 syllable couplets and then ending the poem with an extra seven-syllable line.

Writing for #AtoZChallenge April 2017, Day 19 - Letter S - S for Solitude



  1. This reads like a prayer. Very pretty.

  2. Beautifully executed ... a lovely use of both the photo and the choka.

  3. It reads like a mantra of sorts. A psalm given before you look within to meditate.

  4. Such a lovely flow of the poem..Beautifully expressed

  5. My first reading of a choka -- follows like meditation, mantra. Interesting poetic form.

  6. Those are beautiful thoughts, nicely weaved in the shape of a poem! Thanks for sharing.

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