Saturday, 14 February 2015

Supremacy of "WE"

You, I alone don the silence,
WE spreads miraculous fragrance.

If devious, feel the eternal bond,
that will make you silently strong.

Aura of thoughts - Love is We

If venomous thoughts ever surround,
don't frown, find positivity around.

WE, filled with strength and power,
sense it's magic, before it's over.

Linking Up with the Fiction Challenge ‘From 15 to 50′- February, and also 
sharing with 3WWW#414 - devious, venomous, frown, Two Shoes Tuesday #117 -You or I, Poetry Jam - Silence



@Sonal

35 comments:

  1. Yes,so true....we should always try to find the positivity in every situation! Nice message here.

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    1. Yes Mary, being positive is only way out in difficult situations.

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  2. I always enjoy the positive messages your poems convey.

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    1. Happy that our messages are being enjoyed, we always write positive posts; positivity is our blog theme :)

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  3. Love that miraculous fragrance, it captures so much, so much emotion.

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  4. This is full of optimism ... very uplifting piece :-)

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  5. beautiful optimistic note that's so empowering....

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  6. if we truly care for one another
    and get beyond our own selfishness
    we do have quite the power.

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    1. Yes Brian, if we all know the power of WE, there would be love and peace all over the world.

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    2. there is power in we...when we make it...
      kinda like reading others that link in

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  7. You have s very nice way with words.

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  8. Yes, you are so right, we are stronger when we are together, we can do so much more than you or I alone. We is a powerful equation, and the more people we can add to that way of thinking, the more can accomplish for good. Excellent poem! :-)

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  9. If all the individual egos of you and I united to become we it would be quite magical and all would be peaceful.

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  10. The power of silence... The strength of positivity... Inspiring words!

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  11. I ccan inhale the fragrance of the perfume of positivity spread around.

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  12. I take the fragrance of positivity and optimism from your poem. Beautifully penned!

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  13. When 'you' and 'I' become 'we', 'we' will be stronger.

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    1. Yes Romi, WE will be strongest, which can't be defeated.

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  14. Such an intriguing poem, I read it twice, well written.

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    1. Welcome to blog Inderpreet and thank you for encouraging words.

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  15. To don silence.

    I like that imagery a lot!

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  16. Liked the way you blended multiple prompts with this one :)

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