Sunday, 12 July 2015

Missed Connection

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Keshav was crawling hastily to reach end of the cable tunnel, he paused when surprisingly heard a voice saying “ponder again of your whole deed, will it give you peace”.
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He looked around the aloof tunnel, shut his temporary good side thinking it is utter nonsense and missed connection with inner self.

He then searched bag he robbed at the railway station.

Bag contained few pictures, documents and timeworn laptop.

He was shocked to see his father’s visiting card in the bag; he was disgusted to feel that he missed connection again.

#Word Count - 92

Sharing this post with 3WWW#345 - Aloof, Temporary & Whole, 5 Sentence Fiction - Thief, Light & Shade Challenge Wednesday 8 July, Friday Fictioneers and this post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.



  1. It was the voice of his inner conscience.

  2. Imagine stealing his father's bag!

    1. Yes, that is what was very shocking for him.

  3. Perfect! It's his guilt and as Kalpana Solsi says "its the sound of his inner conscience"

    1. True Uma,inner conscience is what one should always listen to.


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