Wednesday, 13 October 2021

सुनहरे भविष्य की खोज : In search of Better Future : Hindi Poetry

Dussehra hindi poem - MeenalSonal


समय है यह वार्षिक स्वछता अभियान का ,

अपने आस पास और अपने आप को आंकने का ।

तराज़ू नहीं कोई, मोल नहीं कोई, ना तोल है ,

खुद से ही खुद को उत्तम बनाने की यह बात है। 


अनचाहे माया चक्र में इंसान जब विचरता ,

अकस्मात् ही कोई अधर्म कर बैठता ।

यह जात पात की बात नहीं, इंसानियत की है ,

स्वयं में झांक कर कुलक्षण को खोजना है। 


जब भाँप लो बुराइयाँ तो पथ स्वर्ण सा चमकता ,

उस ओर मुड़ और निरंतर इंसान दृढ़ता से चलता ।

सूझ बूझ कर उन कमियों से पल्ला झाड़ना है ,

अपने आप से जीत, अपने एक अंश को हराना है। 


अपने अंदर घर करते रावण का विनाश है आवश्यक ,

समय समय पर क्रोध लोभ के स्तर को घटाना है सूचक ।

यह कार्य ना किसी को सौंपा जाए ना कोई और कर पाता ,

स्वयं ही राम बनकर अपने रावण का विनाश किया जाता ।


दशानन समान इन बुराईयों की कोई छवि नहीं है ,

बस मस्तिष्क को जीत सुविचार की धारणा कुंजी है ।

इस वर्ष इस समय अपने आप को बदलना ,

सुनहरे भविष्य के लिए अपने अतीत को पीछे छोड़ना ।


poem on ram ravan - auraofthoughts

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17 comments:

  1. "दशानन समान इन बुराईयों की कोई छवि नहीं है ,

    बस मस्तिष्क को जीत सुविचार की धारणा कुंजी है ।" एकदम सही। हमें अपने अंदर की बुराइयों को हराना है। तभी सही माईने में हम ऊपर उठ सकते हैं।

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  2. Such a thought provoking poem. I loved the lines "जब भाँप लो बुराइयाँ तो पथ स्वर्ण सा चमकता ,

    उस ओर मुड़ और निरंतर इंसान दृढ़ता से चलता ।

    सूझ बूझ कर उन कमियों से पल्ला झाड़ना है ,

    अपने आप से जीत, अपने एक अंश को हराना है।". indeed life can become a lot better, when we understand our own weakness and try to improve it with dedication.

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  3. A every Line has some hidden message in it. The world will become better place to live when we kill the demon of Greed and Fake arrogance inside us.Lets stop judging those around us, rather start introspecting ourselves.Lets be Kind and Compassionate towards every living being around us.Than in true sense we will Celebrate Dusshera by rising Ram inside us.

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  4. Each one of your poems evokes strong emotions. You really have a way with expressing yourself in the Hindi language!
    Noor

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  5. When people (including you and I) make sure not to commit the 7 sins, the world will be a greater place to live in. Judging others is also something that most of us do, needs to stop. But then, people should also be aware of what they are doing!

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  6. This is such a nice and provoking poem of share I totally agree with you that we human beings are so much into judging others and not looking faults we are carrying in life.

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  7. A very thought provoking poem with to-do tasks. The world will be a better place for you and me only if each one of us strive to be our best, isn't it?

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  8. You write such amazing and deep poetry. I love the passion that this poem conveys albeit in a positive way. We must move on for better future.

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  9. I loved the following lines of your poem:
    इस वर्ष इस समय अपने आप को बदलना ,
    सुनहरे भविष्य के लिए अपने अतीत को पीछे छोड़ना
    I feel leaving behind your past for a beautiful future is sometimes more hard to do but often when we do that, we are able to enjoy the real joys of life.

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  10. I'm really not sure what to write cos I don't read hindi but from the comments it is evident that it has a good choice of words.

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  11. Very nice and meaningful poem. Each line is packed with meanings. I really liked the line that reads, "स्वयं ही राम बनकर अपने रावण का विनाश किया जाता".

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  12. These lines are so deep. Each line has some meaningful thoughts. Moving on and living in the present fully will ensure a better future.

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  13. Good to see that you are a master of Hindi too! Loved the lines "सुनहरे भविष्य के लिए अपने अतीत को पीछे छोड़ना" and "मस्तिष्क को जीत सुविचार की धारणा कुंजी है"
    सारा खेल मस्तिष्क का ही तो है!

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  14. This is such a nice and provoking poem I totally agree with you that we human beings are so much into judging others.

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  15. Such a beautiful and thoughtful poem. Loved your writing and the message that it provides. There are so many things that we humans need to learn from the past and improve each day.

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  16. Your writeup is so deep and thoughtful. I love this Hindi poem . The day we stop judging and work on our weakness ,the place will be a better place to live .

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  17. Such nice curation by you. My mom likes to read poem. Definely gonna forward your page to her.

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