Thursday 8 January 2015

Sunflower Haiku

Golden blush delight
Bright petals swaying to greet
Stand facing the sun

Sunflower - Haiku

Dew droplets shimmer
Like pearls scattered all-around
Gladden every heart 

@ Meenal


12 comments:

  1. They are both beautiful Haiku but the second really touches my heart.
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    1. Thanks Debi, this was my first attempt for Haiku.

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  2. Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading these sunny haiku very much! :-) Bastet.

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  3. Very nice. I too try to think outside the box.
    Your pieces brightened up my cold morning.
    It is about 9 F or -12 C here.

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    1. Thanks Jules, glad that Haiku brightened your morning.

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  4. So cheerful to read on this gloomy evening.

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    1. Thank you Vivin France; happy that I could spread happiness aura :)

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  5. Beauty of a Sun flower captured in terms of words .

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  6. Beautiful set...liked the phrase "golden blush'' very much... :-)

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    1. Welcome to blog Maniparna, happy you liked it.
      Golden blush is what instantly strikes me when I see sunflower, so penned it :)

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