Friday 5 June 2015

Jumble Trouble

When mess is around, stress does it’s round;
frantic becomes nature, screaming is in behavior.

What to do with this jumble, I stand on it to tumble;
emotions are deeply attached, how can I decide to detach. 
Aura-of-thoughts-delete junk
What to exclude is big dilemma!
Is this only my trouble or all bear this huge bundle,
dilemma is not for a day, as things are not to stay.

But surely everything is absorbed to an extent,
that nothing is more left to grab with intent.

So, let go immaterial stuff from your life,
while you keep memories to thrive.

Now, scream out in joyous and spacious world,
where nothing is to jumble and you stay stable.

Sharing with Two Shoes Texas - Jumble or Junk, 3WWW#430 - Absorbed, Deeply, Frantic & Blog-A-Rhythm - Scream

@Sonal 

11 comments:

  1. Cute poem. I like the play on words. ;)

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  2. It is true that there have been studies done which prove that too much clutter in one's life contributes to their restlessness and unhappiness, it is hard to remain peaceful and focused if there is a mess around you. I need to get rid of much more clutter in my house, simplicity in living is the way to inner peace. This was a good poem that made that point well!

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    1. Yes Josie clutter makes one restless.....keep visiting!!!

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  3. You have played skillfully with the rhyme words and your verse flows with fluidity. Enjoyed reading

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    1. Thank you for your kind words Kalpana Solsi !!!

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  4. It is hard to be calm when in a mess. Your poem makes this point very well. Fun read.

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    1. Thanks a lot Patricia .....keep dropping by!!!

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  5. What a nice jumble, you used the poem wonderfully to express scream. I too have shared something similar.

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  6. It's really nice words. Thank you for sharing it with us

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  7. I love the way you play with words. It's really nice to read your poetry

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Your each word matters! So drop a word or two :)