Monday, 23 October 2017

Monstrous Disjuncture

Man
Vows
Woman
To grow kin
But monstrous dogma
Break home affects tender child heart


In this poem Man is referred as social animal. And it's not the person who turns out to be monster in relationships, it can be situations and perspective too.

The above poetry is Fibonnaci poem , A Fibonacci poem is a six-line, 20 syllable poem. The number of syllables in each line of the poem is the sum of the previous two lines : 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8. To know more about it visit Mindlovemisery's Menagerie.


@Meenal 

23 comments:

  1. Monsters do take different forms. Agree you that whatever may be the form, its the weaker, vulnerable link that gets affected the most.
    - Anagha From Team MocktailMommies

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  2. How true..what a powerful message hidden in these lines. Thanks for the share Meenal

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  3. So much said in such few words.
    Beautiful, Meenal!
    Yes, sometimes situations are monsters too!

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    1. Thanks Deliciously Alive,I feel situations are only monsters and humans fall prey to them and few escape with their positivity.

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  4. That's the sad reality today which we read and see around us. Reality vs Expectations. Lovely take & I had no idea about this style of writing, thanks for sharing.

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    1. Yes Dipika, we can't deny the reality but we all together have to make it beautiful world by our good thoughts.

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  5. Perfect! Liked the poetry format too. Will try it sometime. :)

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    1. Thanks Payal. Yes this is interesting poetry format, even we tried for the first time.

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  6. A strong message in few words, Meenal! Yes, the monsters in our situations can overpower us thereby affecting those around us too!

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    1. Yes Shilpa situations turn thoughtful person into monsters.

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  7. These monsterous situations breaks tender hearts.

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  8. This is so true. What can the little one do?

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    1. Yes Jayanthy, hope for positivity is the only way.

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  9. This is a different form of poem I was not aware of. I will surely research more about it.

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    1. If you are looking for different forms then you should definitely visit MIndlovemiserys Meangerie blog

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  10. I know of the fibonacci format because a blogger did an extensive series of various forms of poetry during this year's a to z challenge... lot of respect for the creativity here.. works both realistically and metaphorically

    Godyears.net

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  11. True situations can be monstrous too, sadly every heart bleeds

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    1. Yes Neha every beating heart bleeds, hopefully stone hearted people understand this .

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  12. Awesome work.Just wanted to drop a comment and say I am new to your blog and really like what I am reading.Thanks for the share

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