Saturday, 15 April 2017

Lighthouse

In pitch darkness of fear and ambiguity, my heart starts shivering in search of a rescuer; then a thin clear light shows up stretching itself to guide me and tells me I am here to hold you as lighthouse gives hopes to sinking boat.
 
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My soul the savior
Enlightens the correct path

Propose direction


The above poetry is Haibun(Prose+Haiku/Tanka). I have chosen Haiku to club with prose.
Writing for  #AtoZChallenge April 2017, Day 12 - L for Lighthouse & sharing with

@Sonal 

6 comments:

  1. This is the first time i heard of something called Haibun, its nice
    Tina

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    1. Yes Tina, this form of poetry is both fun and challenge to write.

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  2. Beautiful haibun. Haibun gives you the opportunity to tell more than you can do ever in a haiku or tanka. Very strong.

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    1. Yes Haibun makes it look like a whole package.
      Thanks Kristjaan.

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